Two Questions

i'm going to be honest here, i didn't like this essay at all. i actually had a really hard time even finishing it. i thought it was all over the place and that is didn't really seem like the author had much of a point. i think i would've liked it more if the writer showed some more confidence in the essay. in my opinion, it seemed like she was unsure about what she was writing and it didn't really seem like she knew where she was going with it.
personally, i didn't like her style of drawing either. i thought they were too sloppy and all over the place, much like what her writing was. i thought that all the little side quotes by the creatures were distracting unnecessary; overall i don't think the added anything to the essay. quite frankly, i felt like reading this essay actually brought down my intelligence level. overall i thought the essay was on the childish side and i didn't think that it helped me at all when it comes to better understanding the graphic essay.